Patriots Pen
If I could talk to our country’s
founding fathers, what would I say? I’d say thank you. Thank you for building
the foundation for the greatest country in the world. A place for fresh starts
and a place where you can raise a family with the confidence that your children
will get a fine education and have enough food to eat. A place where people
have equal rights, no matter the color of their skin or their gender. A place
where a child, who started life in poverty, could grow up to be extremely
successful and wealthy. A place where its military will defend our county’s
people and their rights until their dying breaths.
This country
could not be what it is today if it weren’t for the sacrifices made by the
founding fathers. Sailing on a long ship ride to America only with the change
in their pockets, they carried solely the hope of having a better life. Telling
the strongest country in the world at the time that they had a voice and they
were going to use it, they fought so they could have freedoms that they could
only dream of elsewhere. They fought to have a government where the people had
a say in what happened to them and their country, but most of all they fought
for the chance of a better future for their children and grandchildren.
Our country
isn’t perfect; no country is. But our country strives to be the best in every
way possible. The rights we have here in America are rights I take for granted
every day. I take for granted the right to speak freely, to practice whatever
religion I please and I especially I have take for granted how blessed I truly
am to live in the U.S.A!
So Thank you
Fathers for founding the country I love.
Very cheesy. I like the idea but it could use better word choice
ReplyDeleteThank you for those kind words Jack
ReplyDeleteSOOOOOOOOO CEEEEEEESY, I can taste it. But that's how they win em'. Haha don't worry, you wrote it very well in terms of organization. Overall a great piece.
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